A traffic jam on area road
first person: Damnt this blows. I am just trying to get home to my girlfriend. I haven't seen her for so long. I am so ready to see her sweet face and to hold her in my hands.
Third person limited: James sat in the car looking anxious, looking forward to what lied ahead.
Third person omniscient: As James was waiting anxiously in the car to see his girlfriend, she was at home kissing someone else.
Wednesday, November 11, 2009
A slow-moving line at the grocery checkout
first person: Omg! This is taking so long! I mean come on people, when you come to the line your freakin money out. Damnt! If you can't afford stuff don't take it off the shelf, don't have the cashier take it off your receipt. We all have places to go!
third limited: The line was really slow has the impatient woman bounced up and down and glared at the woman in the front of the line.
Third omniscient : As the impatient woman started to draw attention to herself, She started to sweat. No one in that line new that she had to get home to her sick child, as the woman in the front of the line took her time.
first person: Omg! This is taking so long! I mean come on people, when you come to the line your freakin money out. Damnt! If you can't afford stuff don't take it off the shelf, don't have the cashier take it off your receipt. We all have places to go!
third limited: The line was really slow has the impatient woman bounced up and down and glared at the woman in the front of the line.
Third omniscient : As the impatient woman started to draw attention to herself, She started to sweat. No one in that line new that she had to get home to her sick child, as the woman in the front of the line took her time.
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