Wednesday, November 11, 2009

A traffic jam on area road

first person: Damnt this blows. I am just trying to get home to my girlfriend. I haven't seen her for so long. I am so ready to see her sweet face and to hold her in my hands.

Third person limited: James sat in the car looking anxious, looking forward to what lied ahead.

Third person omniscient: As James was waiting anxiously in the car to see his girlfriend, she was at home kissing someone else.
A slow-moving line at the grocery checkout

first person: Omg! This is taking so long! I mean come on people, when you come to the line your freakin money out. Damnt! If you can't afford stuff don't take it off the shelf, don't have the cashier take it off your receipt. We all have places to go!

third limited: The line was really slow has the impatient woman bounced up and down and glared at the woman in the front of the line.

Third omniscient : As the impatient woman started to draw attention to herself, She started to sweat. No one in that line new that she had to get home to her sick child, as the woman in the front of the line took her time.

Tuesday, October 6, 2009

The Waking

Minutes, hours, days past by and then there was a light, a bright light. I suddenly felt myself become warm; I could feel the sun on my body. I could feel the sun's rays on my body. I could smell the trees and flowers; I could feel the pulling my body and spirit. I could hear the deer that were miles away. I could taste the water that was in the air . Then I slowly opened my eyes. My eyes felt naked in this new world. It looked like the world have started over. I could see the pollen floating in the air. As I reached to touch the speck of pollen, I realized my hand was transparent.

Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Metamorphosis

As I opened my eyes, I noticed that the world was dark. Again My eyes opened, and yet it was still dark. I sent the message to my brain to make my body move, but I was still. I could feel nothing below me, like I was suspended in mid air. The world was soundless for me, as if I was the only person in the world. Then with a wave for darkness, I realized that I was senseless. Then I drifted back into unconsciousness.